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2019年11月14日 16:25

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【个】【冬】【天】【终】【于】【熬】【成】【了】【一】【个】【春】【,】【却】【是】【一】【个】【蒙】【蒙】【细】【雨】【的】【春】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【花】【开】【得】【正】【盛】【,】【它】【们】【对】【春】【突】【如】【其】【来】【的】【冷】【漠】【没】【有】【一】【丝】【诧】【异】【。】【它】【们】【笑】【颜】【如】【故】【,】【紧】【紧】【团】【抱】【,】【咬】【住】【嘴】【唇】【,】【不】【落】【下】【任】【何】【一】【滴】【泪】【珠】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【春】【啊】【,】【明】【明】【见】【你】【哭】【得】【那】【么】【伤】【心】【,】【却】【听】【不】【见】【丝】【毫】【呜】【咽】【的】【声】【音】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【两】【岸】【的】【垂】【柳】【不】【语】【,】【只】【是】【静】【静】【的】【,】【静】【静】【的】【,】【细】【雨】【烟】【柳】【,】【把】【它】【们】【朦】【胧】【在】【记】【忆】【里】【,】【似】【乎】【只】【见】【一】【片】【黄】【中】【带】【绿】【的】【花】【簇】【在】【装】【点】【着】【古】【时】【今】【日】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【春】【天】【怎】【么】【了】【?】【她】【的】【温】【柔】【呢】【?】【她】【的】【明】【媚】【呢】【?】【她】【哭】【是】【为】【何】【人】【又】【为】【何】【事】【呢】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【为】【摇】【曳】【着】【的】【花】【撑】【起】【一】【把】【伞】【,】【而】【它】【们】【却】【一】【个】【劲】【儿】【地】【歪】【到】【雨】【里】【。】【细】【雨】【绵】【绵】【,】【落】【在】【伞】【上】【发】【出】【“】【滴】【滴】【答】【答】【”】【的】【声】【音】【,】【像】【交】【错】【的】【钟】【表】【声】【,】【流】【逝】【在】【时】【间】【里】【;】【像】【流】【泻】【的】【音】【符】【,】【奏】【出】【了】【活】【泼】【与】【温】【馨】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【怎】【么】【回】【事】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【放】【下】【手】【中】【的】【伞】【去】【拥】【抱】【哭】【泣】【的】【春】【,】【雨】【水】【冰】【冷】【地】【打】【在】【脸】【上】【却】【又】【化】【做】【一】【股】【暖】【流】【融】【入】【心】【中】【,】【它】【缓】【缓】【地】【滋】【润】【着】【我】【,】【解】【答】【了】【我】【的】【疑】【问】【。】【那】【不】【是】【冷】【雨】【,】【那】【是】【飘】【扬】【的】【花】【瓣】【;】【那】【不】【是】【冷】【雨】【,】【那】【是】【纷】【飞】【的】【柳】【絮】【;】【那】【不】【是】【冷】【雨】【,】【那】【是】【春】【的】【一】【份】【心】【意】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【是】【的】【,】【她】【冷】【漠】【,】【她】【孤】【寂】【,】【只】【是】【为】【了】【锻】【炼】【花】【木】【,】【让】【它】【们】【能】【够】【抵】【抗】【夏】【日】【的】【酷】【热】【,】【让】【它】【们】【能】【够】【抵】【抗】【秋】【日】【的】【凋】【落】【,】【让】【它】【们】【能】【够】【抵】【抗】【冬】【日】【的】【严】【寒】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【把】【爱】【意】【潜】【藏】【在】【冰】【冷】【里】【。】【春】【花】【懂】【得】【,】【柳】【树】【懂】【得】【,】【我】【也】【懂】【得】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【罗】【素】【霞】【 】【赵】【同】【宇】【)】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【出】【去】【旅】【游】【,】【观】【赏】【风】【景】【,】【很】【多】【人】【会】【赞】【叹】【山】【清】【水】【秀】【,】【会】【赞】【叹】【曲】【径】【通】【幽】【,】【还】【会】【赞】【叹】【奇】【风】【异】【俗】【,】【少】【有】【人】【赞】【叹】【这】【里】【的】【树】【真】【不】【错】【!】【也】【许】【因】【为】【树】【太】【常】【见】【,】【树】【也】【太】【普】【通】【,】【人】【们】【往】【往】【在】【徜】【徉】【山】【水】【的】【时】【候】【就】【将】【它】【们】【忽】【略】【了】【!】【但】【我】【不】【,】【我】【走】【到】【哪】【里】【都】【会】【特】【意】【去】【看】【看】【那】【些】【树】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【固】【执】【地】【认】【为】【,】【只】【有】【它】【们】【长】【在】【哪】【里】【,】【哪】【里】【才】【会】【显】【得】【秀】【气】【并】【充】【满】【生】【机】【。】【设】【想】【,】【那】【山】【,】【没】【有】【那】【些】【秀】【衣】【一】【样】【覆】【盖】【的】【树】【,】【会】【显】【得】【多】【么】【突】【兀】【和】【难】【为】【情】【,】【那】【裸】【露】【出】【来】【的】【骨】【骼】【是】【那】【么】【丑】【陋】【;】【设】【想】【,】【那】【水】【,】【如】【果】【不】【是】【潺】【谖】【流】【淌】【在】【林】【间】【,】【它】【们】【会】【多】【么】【危】【险】【和】【孤】【单】【;】【而】【那】【滔】【滔】【江】【河】【和】【海】【洋】【,】【也】【是】【因】【为】【有】【了】【远】【处】【绿】【色】【山】【川】【的】【映】【衬】【和】【沙】【滩】【上】【椰】【树】【的】【陪】【衬】【,】【才】【显】【出】【万】【千】【的】【风】【情】【韵】【致】【,】【才】【有】【了】【讨】【人】【喜】【欢】【和】【诱】【惑】【来】【者】【的】【资】【本】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【所】【以】【,】【树】【啊】【,】【实】【在】【可】【爱】【。】【翻】【翻】【书】【,】【其】【实】【喜】【欢】【树】【的】【人】【还】【真】【不】【少】【,】【不】【只】【我】【一】【个】【!】【陶】【渊】【明】【老】【先】【生】【的】【家】【可】【是】【“】【榆】【柳】【荫】【后】【檐】【,】【桃】【李】【罗】【堂】【前】【”】【啊】【;】【李】【白】【或】【许】【有】【点】【偏】【见】【“】【愿】【君】【学】【长】【松】【,】【慎】【勿】【作】【桃】【李】【”】【;】【张】【九】【龄】【则】【清】【高】【有】【加】【“】【草】【木】【有】【本】【心】【,】【何】【求】【美】【人】【折】【?】【”】【树】【木】【以】【它】【的】【美】【德】【和】【品】【格】【,】【赢】【得】【了】【众】【多】【有】【识】【之】【士】【的】【喜】【爱】【。】【所】【以】【谢】【安】【想】【要】【儿】【女】【有】【出】【息】【,】【提】【出】【的】【期】【望】【是】【“】【譬】【如】【芝】【兰】【玉】【树】【,】【欲】【使】【其】【生】【于】【庭】【阶】【耳】【”】【;】【而】【今】【人】【有】【茅】【盾】【在】【《】【白】【杨】【礼】【赞】【》】【中】【直】【言】【不】【讳】【地】【说】【“】【我】【赞】【美】【白】【杨】【树】【”】【,】【陶】【铸】【在】【《】【松】【树】【的】【风】【格】【》】【里】【感】【叹】【“】【它】【们】【那】【种】【不】【畏】【风】【霜】【的】【姿】【态】【,】【却】【使】【人】【油】【然】【而】【生】【敬】【意】【”】【,】【我】【心】【不】【禁】【戚】【戚】【焉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【树】【啊】【,】【不】【必】【良】【种】【、】【不】【必】【高】【壮】【,】【甚】【至】【不】【必】【奇】【伟】【,】【但】【看】【它】【如】【何】【生】【如】【何】【长】【,】【就】【足】【以】【明】【白】【它】【们】【的】【品】【质】【。】【我】【们】【不】【一】【定】【知】【道】【它】【们】【具】【体】【是】【什】【么】【树】【种】【,】【只】【需】【知】【道】【它】【们】【是】【树】【即】【可】【。】【看】【它】【们】【不】【择】【地】【、】【不】【择】【壤】【,】【长】【在】【故】【宫】【深】【宅】【似】【乎】【是】【它】【们】【的】【荣】【幸】【,】【但】【长】【在】【房】【前】【屋】【后】【、】【田】【野】【村】【头】【它】【们】【也】【愿】【意】【,】【甚】【至】【长】【在】【悬】【崖】【绝】【壁】【、】【荒】【原】【大】【漠】【它】【们】【也】【无】【怨】【言】【。】【只】【是】【生】【长】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【它】【们】【经】【受】【过】【各】【种】【大】【小】【的】【风】【暴】【雨】【霜】【酷】【晒】【;】【它】【们】【经】【受】【过】【各】【种】【摧】【残】【:】【动】【物】【的】【啮】【齿】【啃】【咬】【和】【吞】【食】【,】【人】【类】【的】【摘】【叶】【折】【枝】【和】【砍】【伐】【;】【它】【们】【接】【纳】【飞】【鸟】【,】【保】【护】【它】【们】【的】【家】【,】【甚】【至】【在】【很】【久】【以】【前】【接】【纳】【过】【人】【类】【;】【它】【们】【呼】【吸】【粉】【尘】【灰】【炭】【,】【吐】【出】【氧】【气】【;】【它】【们】【抓】【住】【泥】【土】【,】【保】【护】【一】【方】【水】【土】【一】【方】【人】【脉】【;】【它】【们】【荫】【蔽】【能】【荫】【蔽】【的】【一】【切】【,】【包】【括】【蚂】【蚁】【、】【人】【类】【和】【柏】【油】【路】【;】【它】【们】【很】【多】【时】【候】【更】【是】【舍】【己】【为】【人】【,】【将】【躯】【干】【变】【成】【栋】【梁】【之】【才】【,】【将】【枝】【叶】【化】【为】【柴】【草】【或】【肥】【料】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【看】【着】【它】【们】【,】【敬】【佩】【它】【们】【的】【沉】【静】【、】【无】【私】【、】【肃】【穆】【、】【平】【和】【与】【隐】【忍】【。】【也】【许】【它】【们】【才】【是】【上】【天】【赐】【给】【人】【类】【安】【慰】【你】【的】【礼】【物】【。】【无】【论】【你】【心】【情】【怎】【么】【消】【沉】【低】【落】【,】【当】【你】【看】【见】【它】【们】【那】【挺】【直】【伟】【岸】【的】【身】【躯】【,】【或】【弯】【曲】【婀】【娜】【的】【身】【姿】【,】【怎】【么】【能】【不】【心】【生】【敬】【重】【而】【重】【燃】【希】【望】【?】【无】【论】【你】【感】【慨】【自】【己】【怎】【么】【不】【幸】【,】【当】【你】【看】【到】【曾】【经】【直】【冲】【云】【霄】【的】【它】【们】【,】【在】【电】【锯】【之】【下】【轰】【然】【倒】【地】【之】【时】【,】【你】【又】【怎】【能】【不】【感】【叹】【自】【己】【的】【渺】【小】【无】【知】【?】【无】【论】【你】【怎】【么】【烦】【闷】【抱】【怨】【,】【看】【看】【风】【雨】【中】【的】【它】【们】【,】【你】【还】【有】【什】【么】【经】【受】【不】【起】【?】【树】【无】【言】【,】【唯】【有】【任】【你】【索】【取】【。】【无】【论】【你】【怎】【样】【忧】【愁】【、】【烦】【恼】【,】【只】【要】【在】【树】【荫】【下】【坐】【一】【坐】【,】【一】【切】【都】【会】【归】【于】【平】【静】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【树】【,】【就】【是】【这】【样】【,】【热】【闹】【面】【前】【退】【后】【成】【一】【幅】【背】【景】【,】【需】【要】【面】【前】【奉】【献】【成】【一】【种】【伟】【岸】【。】【它】【们】【的】【前】【生】【不】【过】【是】【一】【粒】【小】【小】【的】【种】【子】【,】【可】【它】【们】【的】【今】【世】【在】【我】【们】【眼】【前】【则】【是】【隐】【忍】【的】【生】【长】【和】【无】【私】【的】【奉】【献】【;】【想】【想】【,】【它】【们】【的】【来】【世】【会】【在】【无】【尽】【时】【间】【里】【的】【生】【长】【,】【更】【会】【是】【地】【下】【黑】【色】【煤】【炭】【的】【生】【成】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【赞】【美】【树】【,】【它】【们】【实】【在】【可】【爱】【。】胡因梦【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【要】【过】【年】【啦】【,】【赶】【集】【去】【哟】【…】【…】【”】【我】【高】【喊】【着】【、】【欢】【蹦】【着】【。】【今】【天】【是】【腊】【月】【二】【十】【三】【,】【过】【小】【年】【啦】【,】【我】【们】【全】【家】【人】【早】【早】【起】【床】【,】【吃】【过】【妈】【妈】【煮】【的】【饺】【子】【,】【准】【备】【坐】【爸】【爸】【的】【农】【用】【车】【去】【集】【市】【买】【年】【货】【。】【昨】【晚】【爸】【爸】【就】【给】【我】【们】【分】【配】【好】【了】【任】【务】【,】【我】【呢】【,】【有】【个】【重】【大】【使】【命】【—】【—】【买】【年】【画】【。】【我】【相】【信】【自】【己】【一】【定】【能】【完】【成】【任】【务】【,】【让】【全】【家】【满】【意】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【路】【上】【人】【来】【人】【往】【,】【我】【也】【顾】【不】【上】【欣】【赏】【眼】【前】【美】【景】【,】【只】【顾】【和】【妈】【妈】【、】【弟】【弟】【说】【着】【买】【什】【么】【样】【的】【年】【画】【布】【置】【我】【们】【家】【的】【构】【想】【呢】【。】【我】【们】【一】【路】【欢】【声】【笑】【语】【,】【十】【几】【公】【里】【的】【路】【程】【一】【转】【眼】【就】【到】【了】【。】【只】【见】【大】【大】【小】【小】【的】【车】【辆】【已】【经】【排】【成】【“】【长】【龙】【”】【,】【堵】【住】【了】【路】【口】【,】【没】【想】【到】【还】【有】【比】【我】【们】【来】【得】【更】【早】【的】【呢】【,】【爸】【爸】【顺】【次】【把】【车】【停】【在】【了】【路】【边】【,】【下】【车】【后】【,】【我】【们】【就】【分】【头】【行】【动】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【到】【集】【上】【那】【才】【知】【道】【什】【么】【叫】【人】【山】【人】【海】【,】【推】【着】【摩】【托】【车】【、】【自】【行】【车】【的】【,】【挑】【着】【篮】【子】【的】【、】【扛】【着】【蛇】【皮】【袋】【子】【的】【一】【个】【挨】【着】【一】【个】【,】【没】【办】【法】【,】【我】【只】【能】【顺】【着】【人】【流】【往】【前】【挪】【,】【只】【听】【得】【吆】【喝】【声】【、】【音】【乐】【声】【、】【欢】【笑】【声】【声】【声】【入】【耳】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【好】【不】【容】【易】【才】【穿】【过】【人】【流】【挤】【进】【画】【店】【,】【买】【年】【画】【的】【人】【真】【不】【少】【呀】【,】【你】【看】【,】【那】【男】【男】【女】【女】【、】【老】【老】【少】【少】【把】【画】【店】【围】【了】【个】【水】【泄】【不】【通】【,】【只】【听】【见】【“】【同】【志】【,】【我】【要】【这】【张】【山】【水】【画】【…】【…】【”】【“】【闺】【女】【,】【你】【帮】【我】【拿】【一】【个】【大】【‘】【福】【’】【字】【…】【…】【”】【的】【声】【音】【此】【起】【彼】【伏】【。】【小】【店】【的】【墙】【上】【、】【柜】【台】【上】【贴】【满】【了】【画】【,】【摆】【满】【了】【画】【,】【有】【“】【满】【园】【春】【色】【关】【不】【住】【”】【的】【烂】【漫】【春】【花】【、】【“】【接】【天】【莲】【叶】【无】【穷】【碧】【”】【的】【映】【日】【荷】【花】【、】【“】【黄】【花】【芬】【芬】【绝】【世】【奇】【”】【的】【临】【霜】【秋】【菊】【、】【“】【凌】【寒】【独】【自】【开】【”】【的】【傲】【雪】【腊】【梅】【;】【也】【有】【那】【“】【浓】【妆】【淡】【抹】【总】【相】【宜】【”】【的】【西】【湖】【、】【“】【黄】【鹤】【一】【去】【不】【复】【返】【”】【的】【黄】【鹤】【楼】【、】【“】【飞】【流】【直】【下】【三】【千】【尺】【,】【疑】【是】【银】【河】【落】【九】【天】【”】【的】【庐】【山】【瀑】【布】【、】【“】【天】【苍】【苍】【,】【野】【茫】【茫】【,】【风】【吹】【草】【低】【见】【牛】【羊】【”】【的】【辽】【阔】【草】【原】【;】【还】【有】【那】【漂】【亮】【的】【明】【星】【靓】【女】【;】【典】【雅】【的】【楼】【阁】【亭】【台】【…】【…】【真】【是】【看】【得】【我】【眼】【花】【缭】【乱】【,】【哪】【一】【幅】【都】【招】【人】【喜】【欢】【,】【哪】【一】【幅】【我】【都】【想】【带】【回】【家】【去】【。】【正】【当】【我】【难】【以】【选】【择】【时】【,】【我】【身】【后】【传】【来】【了】【吵】【闹】【声】【,】【怎】【么】【啦】【?】【好】【奇】【心】【驱】【使】【我】【转】【身】【看】【个】【究】【竟】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【挤】【进】【人】【群】【,】【只】【见】【一】【个】【小】【伙】【子】【满】【脸】【涨】【得】【通】【红】【,】【着】【急】【地】【说】【:】【“】【这】【幅】【画】【是】【我】【先】【看】【上】【的】【,】【我】【就】【要】【结】【婚】【了】【,】【准】【备】【把】【家】【里】【好】【好】【装】【扮】【装】【扮】【,】【买】【这】【幅】【画】【是】【图】【个】【吉】【利】【,】【可】【这】【位】【大】【爷】【也】【想】【要】【,】【店】【里】【又】【只】【剩】【这】【一】【幅】【了】【,】【真】【急】【人】【!】【”】【站】【在】【一】【边】【的】【大】【爷】【也】【忙】【着】【解】【释】【:】【“】【小】【伙】【子】【,】【不】【是】【我】【跟】【你】【争】【,】【我】【是】【想】【跟】【你】【商】【量】【,】【你】【看】【我】【都】【七】【十】【多】【岁】【了】【,】【种】【了】【一】【辈】【子】【庄】【稼】【,】【现】【在】【这】【日】【子】【好】【过】【了】【,】【得】【感】【谢】【党】【和】【国】【家】【的】【好】【政】【策】【。】【改】【革】【开】【放】【好】【啊】【,】【咱】【们】【老】【百】【姓】【兜】【里】【有】【了】【钱】【,】【我】【家】【也】【盖】【了】【高】【楼】【,】【就】【想】【买】【些】【画】【贴】【着】【添】【添】【喜】【气】【,】【这】【幅】【‘】【松】【鹤】【延】【年】【’】【正】【合】【我】【意】【,】【不】【瞒】【大】【伙】【,】【我】【想】【挂】【在】【堂】【中】【,】【也】【让】【我】【延】【年】【益】【寿】【,】【好】【多】【享】【几】【年】【清】【福】【哇】【!】【小】【伙】【子】【,】【别】【怪】【大】【爷】【我】【自】【私】【啊】【!】【”】【老】【大】【爷】【又】【想】【了】【一】【下】【接】【着】【说】【:】【“】【好】【啦】【,】【这】【画】【你】【买】【吧】【,】【你】【是】【办】【一】【生】【的】【大】【事】【,】【耽】【误】【不】【得】【。】【”】【一】【席】【话】【让】【在】【场】【的】【人】【都】【感】【动】【了】【,】【“】【是】【啊】【,】【大】【爷】【说】【得】【好】【,】【我】【们】【的】【生】【活】【好】【啦】【,】【是】【要】【感】【谢】【共】【产】【党】【啊】【!】【”】【“】【我】【们】【的】【精】【神】【生】【活】【也】【要】【提】【高】【啊】【!】【”】【“】【可】【只】【有】【一】【幅】【画】【怎】【么】【办】【呢】【?】【”】【“】【小】【伙】【子】【,】【你】【年】【轻】【,】【买】【别】【的】【吧】【,】【好】【画】【多】【着】【呢】【!】【”】【“】【那】【不】【行】【!】【人】【家】【是】【办】【喜】【事】【!】【”】【大】【家】【七】【嘴】【八】【舌】【议】【论】【着】【,】【营】【业】【员】【也】【为】【难】【了】【,】【这】【时】【人】【群】【中】【一】【个】【中】【年】【妇】【女】【说】【话】【了】【:】【“】【要】【不】【,】【把】【我】【这】【幅】【给】【你】【们】【吧】【,】【我】【再】【买】【别】【的】【,】【反】【正】【好】【画】【多】【得】【很】【!】【”】【一】【场】【小】【小】【的】【风】【波】【总】【算】【平】【息】【了】【,】【大】【爷】【、】【小】【伙】【子】【都】【买】【到】【了】【他】【们】【喜】【欢】【的】【画】【,】【高】【兴】【地】【离】【开】【了】【。】【画】【店】【又】【拥】【挤】【起】【来】【,】【我】【也】【终】【于】【买】【好】【了】【喜】【欢】【的】【年】【画】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【出】【画】【店】【,】【迎】【面】【吹】【来】【一】【阵】【凛】【冽】【的】【寒】【风】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【缩】【了】【一】【下】【脖】【子】【,】【好】【冷】【!】【但】【我】【心】【里】【觉】【得】【好】【温】【暖】【,】【好】【幸】【福】【,】【我】【要】【赶】【紧】【把】【这】【漂】【亮】【的】【年】【画】【带】【回】【家】【,】【想】【着】【、】【笑】【着】【,】【我】【不】【由】【得】【加】【快】【了】【脚】【步】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【陈】【琼】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【场】【面】【描】【写】【的】【谋】【篇】【布】【局】【很】【有】【特】【点】【:】【方】【位】【明】【晰】【,】【次】【序】【井】【然】【,】【笔】【法】【错】【落】【有】【致】【。】【场】【面】【描】【写】【是】【写】【作】【者】【的】【基】【本】【功】【,】【要】【写】【好】【场】【面】【,】【必】【须】【做】【到】【点】【面】【结】【合】【、】【动】【静】【结】【合】【、】【音】【画】【结】【合】【。】【既】【有】【整】【体】【景】【物】【的】【鸟】【瞰】【,】【又】【有】【个】【别】【典】【型】【景】【物】【人】【物】【特】【写】【;】【既】【有】【静】【态】【的】【描】【摹】【,】【又】【有】【动】【态】【的】【叙】【写】【;】【既】【有】【传】【神】【的】【人】【物】【活】【动】【,】【又】【有】【烘】【托】【人】【物】【的】【衬】【景】【。】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【在】【这】【几】【方】【面】【较】【为】【成】【功】【,】【其】【笔】【法】【值】【得】【借】【鉴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【点】【评】【老】【师】【:】【甫】【田】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【提】【升】【作】【文】【水】【平】【,】【大】【致】【可】【以】【从】【三】【个】【方】【面】【努】【力】【,】【即】【内】【容】【、】【结】【构】【和】【语】【言】【。】【相】【对】【来】【说】【,】【内】【容】【和】【结】【构】【的】【问】【题】【,】【一】【经】【指】【点】【,】【收】【效】【比】【较】【明】【显】【。】【而】【提】【升】【语】【言】【表】【现】【能】【力】【,】【则】【须】【潜】【移】【默】【化】【,】【日】【积】【月】【累】【,】【难】【以】【立】【竿】【见】【影】【。】【那】【么】【,】【什】【么】【是】【语】【言】【表】【现】【力】【?】【语】【言】【表】【现】【力】【就】【是】【指】【在】【一】【定】【的】【语】【境】【中】【,】【应】【对】【表】【达】【需】【要】【的】【语】【言】【再】【现】【能】【力】【。】【语】【言】【再】【现】【,】【自】【然】【需】【要】【词】【汇】【,】【因】【此】【,】【积】【累】【词】【汇】【量】【是】【必】【要】【的】【,】【多】【读】【是】【积】【累】【词】【汇】【的】【途】【径】【。】【然】【而】【,】【光】【有】【词】【汇】【还】【不】【行】【,】【还】【须】【意】【到】【笔】【随】【,】【应】【需】【设】【词】【。】【这】【种】【情】【动】【辞】【发】【的】【能】【力】【是】【隐】【性】【的】【,】【是】【在】【写】【作】【实】【践】【中】【自】【然】【 】【呈】【现】【的】【。】【有】【人】【称】【之】【为】【“】【语】【感】【”】【,】【它】【是】【在】【不】【断】【地】【读】【写】【实】【践】【中】【逐】【渐】【养】【成】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【《】【他】【们】【》】【在】【语】【言】【运】【用】【上】【颇】【具】【特】【色】【。】【这】【原】【是】【2】【0】【0】【8】【年】【上】【海】【一】【篇】【高】【考】【作】【文】【,】【对】【于】【初】【中】【学】【生】【来】【说】【,】【年】【级】【层】【次】【可】【能】【高】【了】【一】【点】【,】【但】【取】【法】【乎】【上】【,】【择】【善】【而】【从】【。】【又】【因】【为】【它】【是】【现】【场】【作】【文】【,】【比】【较】【真】【实】【地】【表】【现】【了】【学】【生】【的】【语】【言】【能】【力】【,】【所】【以】【,】【从】【写】【作】【实】【践】【出】【发】【,】【讨】【论】【语】【言】【表】【现】【规】【律】【,】【对】【同】【学】【们】【可】【能】【会】【有】【较】【大】【的】【启】【发】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【先】【读】【原】【文】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【们】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【城】【市】【尽】【头】【,】【没】【有】【繁】【华】【的】【街】【市】【,】【闪】【亮】【的】【霓】【虹】【;】【在】【城】【市】【的】【尽】【头】【,】【只】【有】【破】【旧】【的】【棚】【户】【区】【,】【有】【饱】【经】【生】【活】【风】【霜】【的】【生】【命】【;】【在】【城】【市】【的】【尽】【头】【,】【有】【他】【们】【这】【样】【一】【群】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【让】【我】【怎】【样】【称】【呼】【他】【们】【?】【外】【来】【务】【工】【人】【员】【子】【女】【?】【农】【民】【子】【弟】【?】【抑】【或】【是】【农】【民】【工】【二】【代】【?】【不】【,】【我】【不】【想】【用】【这】【些】【冰】【冷】【的】【名】【字】【称】【呼】【他】【们】【,】【我】【多】【想】【叫】【着】【他】【们】【带】【着】【泥】【土】【气】【的】【乳】【名】【,】【拉】【着】【他】【们】【的】【小】【手】【,】【走】【近】【他】【们】【的】【生】【活】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【们】【从】【小】【生】【长】【在】【故】【乡】【的】【青】【山】【绿】【水】【中】【,】【纯】【洁】【的】【灵】【魂】【在】【田】【野】【里】【抽】【穗】【拔】【节】【。】【在】【山】【野】【的】【风】【中】【,】【他】【们】【奔】【跑】【着】【,】【憧】【憬】【着】【。】【风】【从】【田】【野】【中】【吹】【过】【,】【吹】【进】【了】【城】【市】【,】【为】【了】【生】【计】【,】【为】【了】【未】【来】【,】【他】【们】【跟】【从】【父】【母】【来】【到】【了】【城】【市】【,】【在】【城】【市】【的】【尽】【头】【扎】【下】【了】【根】【。】【于】【是】【习】【惯】【了】【青】【山】【绿】【水】【的】【双】【眸】【第】【一】【次】【触】【碰】【到】【了】【高】【楼】【大】【厦】【、】【车】【水】【马】【龙】【。】【他】【们】【不】【知】【道】【怎】【样】【穿】【过】【六】【车】【道】【的】【马】【路】【,】【小】【小】【的】【手】【指】【怎】【么】【也】【数】【不】【清】【写】【字】【楼】【的】【层】【数】【。】【繁】【华】【的】【现】【代】【文】【明】【不】【曾】【给】【他】【们】【带】【来】【任】【何】【快】【乐】【,】【这】【一】【次】【,】【却】【在】【心】【上】【烙】【下】【了】【深】【深】【的】【痕】【迹】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【们】【背】【起】【书】【包】【,】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【融】【入】【城】【市】【的】【生】【活】【,】【可】【是】【却】【在】【“】【城】【市】【人】【”】【异】【样】【的】【眼】【光】【中】【,】【第】【一】【次】【明】【白】【了】【户】【口】【与】【暂】【住】【证】【的】【区】【别】【。】【他】【们】【都】【是】【父】【母】【心】【头】【的】【宝】【啊】【!】【却】【过】【早】【地】【承】【担】【了】【不】【属】【于】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【的】【负】【担】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【放】【学】【回】【家】【,】【他】【们】【做】【好】【简】【单】【的】【晚】【饭】【,】【父】【母】【还】【在】【工】【地】【或】【菜】【场】【上】【劳】【作】【;】【午】【夜】【醒】【来】【,】【泪】【眼】【中】【城】【里】【的】【星】【空】【没】【有】【家】【乡】【的】【明】【亮】【;】【悄】【悄】【许】【愿】【,】【希】【望】【明】【天】【他】【们】【的】【打】【工】【子】【弟】【小】【学】【不】【会】【因】【交】【不】【出】【电】【费】【而】【被】【查】【封】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【然】【而】【,】【在】【他】【们】【日】【益】【长】【高】【的】【身】【体】【上】【,】【我】【看】【到】【了】【他】【们】【的】【成】【长】【。】【记】【得】【一】【位】【记】【者】【问】【一】【个】【打】【工】【子】【弟】【学】【校】【的】【孩】【子】【,】【学】【成】【后】【是】【否】【会】【回】【到】【家】【乡】【时】【,】【小】【姑】【娘】【毫】【不】【犹】【豫】【地】【说】【:】【当】【然】【,】【一】【定】【回】【去】【!】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【差】【点】【落】【下】【泪】【来】【,】【为】【他】【们】【的】【成】【长】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【那】【年】【春】【晚】【他】【们】【稚】【气】【的】【宣】【言】【:】【“】【我】【们】【的】【学】【校】【很】【小】【,】【但】【我】【们】【的】【成】【绩】【不】【差】【”】【“】【我】【们】【不】【和】【城】【里】【的】【孩】【子】【比】【爸】【爸】【”】【“】【北】【京】【的】【2】【0】【0】【8】【,】【也】【是】【我】【们】【的】【2】【0】【0】【8】【!】【”】【他】【们】【逐】【渐】【成】【熟】【,】【告】【别】【昨】【天】【的】【羞】【怯】【,】【开】【始】【迎】【接】【新】【的】【一】【天】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【虽】【然】【,】【他】【们】【还】【在】【为】【不】【多】【的】【学】【费】【而】【苦】【恼】【;】【虽】【然】【,】【学】【校】【还】【是】【交】【不】【上】【水】【电】【费】【;】【虽】【然】【,】【还】【有】【好】【多】【体】【制】【还】【不】【够】【完】【善】【…】【…】【虽】【然】【有】【好】【多】【个】【“】【虽】【然】【”】【,】【但】【是】【,】【只】【有】【一】【个】【“】【但】【是】【”】【就】【足】【够】【了】【,】【已】【经】【有】【好】【多】【视】【线】【转】【向】【他】【们】【,】【他】【们】【正】【在】【茁】【壮】【地】【成】【长】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【太】【阳】【从】【地】【平】【线】【上】【升】【起】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【城】【市】【的】【尽】【头】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【他】【们】【的】【生】【活】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【他】【们】【,】【终】【将】【会】【成】【为】【我】【们】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【原】【题】【是】【:】【“】【平】【常】【大】【家】【关】【注】【更】【多】【的】【也】【许】【是】【‘】【我】【们】【’】【,】【如】【果】【把】【视】【线】【转】【向】【‘】【他】【们】【’】【,】【你】【会】【看】【到】【什】【么】【,】【又】【会】【想】【到】【什】【么】【?】【请】【以】【‘】【他】【们】【’】【为】【题】【,】【写】【一】【篇】【文】【章】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【是】【应】【题】【之】【作】【。】【作】【者】【关】【注】【的】【“】【他】【们】【”】【,】【是】【城】【市】【中】【一】【个】【特】【殊】【的】【群】【体】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【。】【文】【章】【有】【记】【叙】【,】【有】【描】【写】【,】【有】【抒】【情】【,】【有】【议】【论】【,】【语】【言】【表】【现】【比】【较】【全】【面】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【语】【言】【顺】【畅】【是】【作】【文】【的】【基】【本】【要】【求】【。】【所】【谓】【顺】【畅】【,】【它】【包】【括】【用】【词】【准】【确】【和】【合】【乎】【逻】【辑】【两】【个】【方】【面】【。】【运】【用】【词】【语】【,】【特】【别】【是】【关】【键】【词】【语】【,】【要】【注】【意】【选】【准】【。】【比】【如】【,】【文】【章】【在】【表】【现】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【居】【住】【环】【境】【时】【,】【选】【用】【“】【在】【城】【市】【的】【尽】【头】【”】【一】【语】【概】【括】【,】【“】【尽】【头】【”】【一】【词】【,】【准】【确】【点】【出】【城】【乡】【结】【合】【的】【地】【域】【特】【点】【,】【反】【映】【农】【民】【工】【生】【活】【的】【艰】【辛】【,】【极】【具】【真】【实】【性】【。】【又】【如】【,】【反】【映】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【成】【长】【,】【文】【章】【说】【:】【“】【他】【们】【逐】【渐】【成】【熟】【,】【告】【别】【昨】【天】【的】【羞】【怯】【,】【开】【始】【迎】【接】【新】【的】【一】【天】【。】【”】【“】【羞】【怯】【”】【一】【词】【,】【与】【“】【成】【熟】【”】【呼】【应】【,】【揭】【示】【他】【们】【的】【心】【理】【变】【化】【过】【程】【,】【既】【真】【切】【,】【又】【生】【动】【。】【再】【从】【语】【句】【的】【连】【贯】【来】【说】【,】【要】【达】【到】【前】【后】【照】【应】【,】【顺】【理】【成】【章】【,】【就】【必】【须】【合】【乎】【语】【言】【的】【逻】【辑】【顺】【序】【。】【仍】【以】【《】【他】【们】【》】【一】【文】【为】【例】【,】【全】【文】【共】【1】【0】【个】【段】【落】【,】【分】【4】【个】【层】【次】【。】【第】【1】【段】【为】【第】【1】【层】【次】【,】【写】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【居】【住】【环】【境】【,】【紧】【承】【题】【目】【“】【他】【们】【”】【而】【来】【。】【第】【2】【段】【为】【第】【2】【层】【次】【,】【写】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【称】【呼】【。】【第】【3】【层】【次】【,】【3】【至】【7】【段】【,】【写】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【初】【到】【城】【市】【(】【“】【第】【一】【次】【触】【碰】【到】【了】【高】【楼】【大】【厦】【”】【)】【“】【融】【入】【城】【市】【”】【“】【逐】【渐】【成】【熟】【”】【,】【依】【次】【写】【他】【们】【的】【心】【理】【压】【力】【、】【生】【活】【负】【担】【和】【未】【来】【愿】【望】【。】【第】【4】【层】【次】【,】【8】【至】【1】【0】【段】【,】【写】【对】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【评】【论】【。】【全】【文】【层】【次】【井】【然】【,】【娓】【娓】【道】【来】【,】【合】【乎】【生】【活】【逻】【辑】【,】【也】【符】【合】【感】【情】【逻】【辑】【。】【语】【言】【编】【排】【的】【逻】【辑】【性】【是】【语】【言】【顺】【畅】【的】【内】【在】【基】【础】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 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】【语】【言】【形】【象】【是】【对】【作】【文】【语】【言】【的】【又】【一】【要】【求】【。】【就】【表】【达】【方】【式】【而】【言】【,】【对】【于】【描】【写】【用】【语】【,】【求】【形】【象】【表】【现】【,】【中】【学】【生】【相】【对】【熟】【悉】【,】【如】【运】【用】【比】【喻】【、】【拟】【人】【等】【修】【辞】【方】【法】【,】【往】【往】【得】【心】【应】【手】【。】【而】【用】【于】【叙】【述】【、】【议】【论】【、】【抒】【情】【等】【表】【达】【方】【式】【,】【求】【其】【形】【象】【化】【表】【现】【就】【较】【难】【驾】【驭】【。】【有】【鉴】【于】【此】【,】【本】【篇】【作】【文】【恰】【恰】【在】【后】【者】【表】【现】【突】【出】【,】【可】【引】【为】【范】【例】【。】【如】【文】【章】【在】【叙】【述】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【生】【活】【状】【况】【时】【,】【不】【是】【简】【单】【化】【地】【用】【一】【个】【“】【艰】【苦】【”】【词】【语】【了】【之】【,】【而】【是】【通】【过】【“】【破】【旧】【的】【棚】【户】【区】【”】【“】【简】【单】【的】【晚】【饭】【”】【“】【交】【不】【出】【电】【费】【”】【“】【为】【不】【多】【的】【学】【费】【苦】【恼】【”】【等】【具】【体】【、】【形】【象】【的】【词】【语】【加】【以】【凸】【现】【。】【写】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【心】【理】【压】【力】【,】【也】【不】【是】【用】【一】【个】【“】【苦】【闷】【”】【了】【之】【,】【而】【是】【通】【过】【“】【他】【们】【不】【知】【道】【怎】【样】【穿】【过】【六】【车】【道】【的】【马】【路】【,】【小】【小】【的】【手】【指】【怎】【么】【也】【数】【不】【清】【写】【字】【楼】【的】【层】【数】【”】【,】【写】【他】【们】【的】【茫】【然】【;】【用】【“】【午】【夜】【醒】【来】【,】【泪】【眼】【中】【城】【里】【的】【星】【空】【没】【有】【家】【乡】【的】【明】【亮】【”】【写】【他】【们】【的】【失】【落】【。】【特】【别】【是】【写】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【成】【长】【,】【原】【本】【内】【容】【繁】【多】【,】【概】【括】【都】【难】【。】【本】【文】【却】【能】【以】【形】【象】【出】【之】【,】【生】【动】【展】【示】【。】【文】【章】【写】【他】【们】【在】【农】【村】【时】【,】【“】【纯】【洁】【的】【灵】【魂】【在】【田】【野】【里】【抽】【穗】【拔】【节】【”】【,】【来】【到】【城】【市】【,】【“】【他】【们】【逐】【渐】【成】【熟】【,】【告】【别】【昨】【天】【的】【羞】【怯】【,】【开】【始】【迎】【接】【新】【的】【一】【天】【”】【,】【“】【抽】【穗】【拔】【节】【”】【,】【比】【喻】【贴】【切】【,】【何】【其】【形】【象】【!】【又】【何】【其】【生】【动】【!】【告】【别】【“】【羞】【怯】【”】【,】【刻】【画】【心】【态】【,】【惟】【妙】【惟】【肖】【,】【何】【其】【形】【象】【,】【何】【其】【真】【切】【!】【议】【论】【亦】【然】【。】【一】【般】【地】【说】【,】【议】【论】【多】【用】【抽】【象】【、】【概】【括】【的】【语】【气】【,】【而】【本】【篇】【作】【文】【却】【能】【以】【形】【象】【的】【语】【言】【展】【开】【,】【如】【评】【论】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【心】【理】【压】【力】【,】【文】【章】【说】【:】【“】【他】【们】【都】【是】【父】【母】【心】【头】【的】【宝】【啊】【!】【却】【过】【早】【地】【承】【担】【了】【不】【属】【于】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【的】【负】【担】【。】【”】【表】【达】【了】【作】【者】【的】【同】【情】【之】【心】【和】【不】【平】【之】【意】【。】【在】【预】【言】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【必】【将】【有】【光】【明】【的】【未】【来】【时】【,】【文】【章】【用】【了】【“】【太】【阳】【从】【地】【平】【线】【上】【升】【起】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【城】【市】【的】【尽】【头】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【他】【们】【的】【生】【活】【”】【,】【以】【“】【阳】【光】【”】【作】【喻】【,】【寓】【议】【于】【形】【,】【读】【懂】【了】【形】【象】【,】【也】【就】【读】【懂】【了】【意】【义】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【含】【蓄】【表】【达】【是】【语】【言】【表】【现】【较】【高】【的】【层】【次】【。】【语】【言】【简】【洁】【而】【意】【蕴】【丰】【厚】【是】【含】【蓄】【的】【特】【点】【。】【《】【他】【们】【》】【为】【少】【年】【作】【文】【,】【能】【做】【到】【这】【一】【点】【是】【难】【能】【可】【贵】【的】【。】【文】【章】【谈】【到】【对】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【种】【种】【称】【呼】【,】【什】【么】【“】【农】【民】【子】【弟】【”】【“】【农】【民】【二】【代】【”】【等】【等】【,】【作】【者】【说】【:】【“】【我】【不】【想】【用】【这】【些】【冰】【冷】【的】【名】【字】【称】【呼】【他】【们】【…】【…】【”】【“】【冰】【冷】【”】【一】【词】【,】【情】【动】【于】【衷】【,】【情】【感】【却】【是】【炽】【热】【的】【。】【文】【章】【最】【后】【一】【句】【:】【“】【他】【们】【,】【终】【将】【会】【成】【为】【我】【们】【。】【”】【这】【是】【全】【文】【中】【心】【思】【想】【的】【概】【括】【,】【“】【他】【们】【”】【和】【“】【我】【们】【”】【由】【分】【而】【合】【,】【不】【仅】【充】【分】【表】【达】【了】【作】【者】【对】【“】【外】【来】【务】【工】【子】【女】【”】【的】【肯】【定】【和】【赞】【美】【,】【揭】【示】【了】【他】【们】【成】【长】【的】【意】【义】【,】【而】【且】【从】【一】【个】【侧】【面】【反】【映】【了】【当】【代】【中】【国】【社】【会】【的】【变】【革】【,】【城】【市】【化】【进】【程】【的】【时】【代】【步】【伐】【。】【用】【语】【深】【刻】【,】【意】【味】【无】【穷】【,】【言】【约】【意】【丰】【,】【达】【到】【语】【言】【含】【蓄】【表】【达】【的】【高】【度】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【《】【他】【们】【》】【一】【文】【写】【于】【现】【场】【,】【为】【应】【题】【而】【作】【,】【作】【文】【语】【言】【能】【写】【得】【如】【此】【顺】【畅】【,】【如】【此】【形】【象】【而】【又】【言】【简】【意】【深】【,】【实】【为】【不】【易】【,】【可】【见】【作】【者】【扎】【实】【的】【语】【言】【基】【本】【功】【。】【作】【家】【孙】【犁】【说】【:】【“】【从】【事】【写】【作】【的】【人】【,】【应】【当】【像】【追】【求】【真】【理】【一】【样】【去】【追】【求】【语】【言】【,】【应】【当】【把】【语】【言】【大】【量】【贮】【积】【起】【来】【。】【应】【当】【经】【常】【把】【你】【的】【语】【言】【放】【在】【纸】【上】【,】【放】【在】【你】【的】【心】【里】【,】【用】【纸】【的】【砧】【、】【心】【的】【锤】【来】【锤】【炼】【它】【们】【。】【”】【(】【《】【文】【艺】【学】【习】【》】【)】【有】【志】【于】【写】【作】【的】【同】【学】【们】【,】【正】【应】【该】【记】【住】【这】【三】【个】【“】【应】【当】【”】【,】【尝】【试】【以】【“】【纸】【的】【砧】【”】【、】【“】【心】【的】【锤】【”】【来】【提】【升】【自】【己】【的】【语】【言】【表】【现】【能】【力】【,】【倘】【能】【如】【是】【,】【何】【愁】【不】【成】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【微】【格】【素】【材】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【万】【木】【凋】【零】【山】【不】【动】【,】【百】【川】【皆】【旱】【海】【长】【深】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【出】【处】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【唐】【·】【李】【群】【玉】【《】【辱】【绵】【州】【于】【中】【丞】【书】【信】【》】【:】【“】【一】【缄】【垂】【露】【到】【云】【林】【,】【中】【有】【孙】【阳】【念】【骥】【心】【。】【万】【木】【凋】【零】【山】【不】【动】【,】【百】【川】【皆】【旱】【海】【长】【深】【。】【风】【林】【想】【见】【瑶】【台】【鹤】【,】【诗】【韵】【如】【闻】【渌】【水】【琴】【。】【他】【日】【纵】【陪】【池】【上】【酌】【,】【已】【应】【难】【到】【暝】【猿】【吟】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【[】【哲】【理】【链】【接】【]】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【所】【有】【的】【树】【木】【都】【有】【凋】【零】【的】【时】【候】【,】【而】【山】【却】【岿】【然】【不】【动】【;】【所】【有】【的】【河】【流】【都】【有】【旱】【的】【时】【候】【,】【而】【大】【海】【却】【永】【远】【那】【么】【深】【泓】【。】【事】【物】【的】【变】【化】【都】【是】【由】【量】【变】【到】【质】【变】【,】【在】【这】【一】【变】【化】【中】【,】【时】【间】【的】【长】【短】【很】【不】【一】【样】【,】【有】【的】【事】【物】【量】【变】【阶】【段】【比】【较】【短】【,】【而】【有】【的】【事】【物】【量】【变】【阶】【段】【却】【特】【别】【长】【,】【表】【现】【出】【相】【对】【的】【稳】【定】【性】【和】【静】【止】【状】【态】【。】【山】【、】【海】【的】【量】【变】【阶】【段】【就】【是】【比】【较】【长】【的】【,】【所】【以】【给】【人】【以】【“】【不】【动】【”】【和】【“】【长】【深】【”】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【常】【用】【来】【比】【喻】【人】【有】【着】【一】【贯】【的】【追】【求】【,】【立】【场】【坚】【定】【,】【不】【随】【世】【俗】【变】【幻】【。】【也】【比】【喻】【做】【学】【问】【要】【有】【深】【厚】【扎】【实】【的】【功】【底】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】胡因梦【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【的】【身】【影】【又】【在】【脑】【海】【中】【出】【现】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【到】【底】【是】【怎】【么】【了】【,】【妈】【妈】【离】【家】【才】【两】【天】【,】【为】【什】【么】【我】【会】【如】【此】【想】【念】【那】【个】【背】【影】【苍】【老】【的】【人】【?】【她】【才】【离】【家】【两】【天】【,】【我】【却】【觉】【得】【好】【像】【离】【开】【了】【两】【年】【,】【一】【进】【家】【门】【,】【觉】【得】【家】【里】【冷】【冷】【清】【清】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【两】【天】【前】【,】【我】【还】【兴】【高】【采】【烈】【地】【跟】【妈】【妈】【说】【:】【“】【妈】【,】【你】【放】【心】【地】【去】【吧】【,】【把】【事】【儿】【办】【妥】【了】【再】【回】【来】【!】【姥】【姥】【在】【老】【家】【挺】【想】【你】【的】【嘛】【,】【你】【就】【多】【陪】【陪】【她】【,】【呆】【够】【了】【再】【回】【来】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【惊】【讶】【地】【看】【着】【我】【,】【问】【我】【怎】【么】【变】【得】【这】【么】【懂】【事】【了】【?】【嘿】【,】【我】【还】【真】【希】【望】【她】【回】【来】【得】【越】【晚】【越】【好】【,】【因】【为】【:】【我】【受】【不】【了】【她】【那】【高】【音】【嗓】【门】【!】【动】【不】【动】【就】【在】【一】【楼】【大】【喊】【,】【好】【像】【在】【二】【楼】【的】【我】【们】【是】【聋】【子】【似】【的】【。】【她】【那】【惊】【天】【动】【地】【的】【嗓】【门】【,】【说】【不】【准】【聋】【子】【都】【给】【震】【得】【不】【聋】【了】【。】【更】【让】【我】【疯】【狂】【的】【是】【,】【她】【每】【次】【大】【喊】【的】【内】【容】【都】【是】【琐】【碎】【之】【极】【,】【连】【“】【起】【风】【了】【,】【多】【穿】【件】【衣】【服】【”】【都】【要】【喊】【,】【我】【们】【在】【她】【眼】【里】【简】【直】【是】【聋】【子】【兼】【傻】【子】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【还】【有】【,】【她】【的】【唠】【叨】【总】【让】【我】【有】【种】【逃】【跑】【的】【冲】【动】【。】【雷】【同】【的】【内】【容】【总】【能】【不】【厌】【其】【烦】【地】【唠】【叨】【几】【遍】【,】【她】【简】【直】【成】【了】【复】【读】【机】【!】【有】【一】【次】【,】【我】【在】【学】【校】【犯】【错】【误】【挨】【了】【老】【师】【的】【批】【评】【。】【回】【到】【家】【,】【我】【不】【小】【心】【说】【漏】【了】【嘴】【,】【于】【是】【乎】【,】【她】【又】【喋】【喋】【不】【休】【地】【数】【落】【起】【来】【:】【你】【呀】【,】【这】【么】【大】【个】【人】【了】【还】【犯】【错】【,】【人】【要】【知】【错】【改】【错】【,】【不】【能】【在】【相】【同】【的】【地】【方】【跌】【倒】【几】【次】【,】【记】【住】【了】【吗】【…】【…】【同】【样】【的】【话】【说】【了】【一】【遍】【又】【一】【遍】【,】【我】【听】【得】【快】【疯】【了】【!】【全】【身】【发】【热】【,】【“】【几】【欲】【先】【走】【”】【,】【仿】【佛】【多】【过】【几】【秒】【我】【就】【会】【亡】【命】【似】【的】【!】【我】【还】【真】【的】【是】【怕】【了】【她】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【会】【儿】【,】【她】【去】【了】【姥】【姥】【家】【,】【我】【的】【耳】【根】【终】【于】【清】【静】【了】【,】【我】【真】【的】【想】【她】【待】【在】【姥】【姥】【家】【住】【一】【个】【月】【再】【回】【来】【才】【好】【呢】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【是】【,】【仅】【仅】【过】【了】【两】【天】【啊】【,】【我】【的】【心】【竟】【是】【如】【此】【强】【烈】【思】【念】【她】【,】【恨】【不】【得】【马】【上】【乘】【飞】【机】【把】【她】【绑】【回】【来】【。】【如】【今】【,】【我】【想】【不】【起】【她】【的】【“】【坏】【”】【,】【只】【忆】【起】【了】【她】【的】【好】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【早】【上】【已】【经】【是】【6】【:】【5】【7】【分】【了】【,】【我】【急】【急】【忙】【忙】【地】【拿】【了】【两】【个】【蛋】【黄】【派】【冲】【出】【门】【。】【上】【课】【的】【时】【候】【,】【饿】【得】【头】【晕】【眼】【花】【。】【终】【于】【挨】【到】【放】【学】【,】【全】【身】【都】【像】【被】【抽】【干】【了】【一】【样】【,】【软】【绵】【绵】【的】【终】【于】【到】【家】【了】【,】【谁】【知】【道】【桌】【上】【就】【一】【汤】【一】【菜】【,】【勉】【强】【吃】【点】【,】【下】【午】【还】【有】【体】【育】【课】【呢】【!】【放】【学】【后】【,】【参】【加】【了】【民】【乐】【队】【的】【训】【练】【后】【,】【我】【如】【饿】【狼】【般】【连】【跑】【带】【飞】【地】【冲】【到】【饭】【堂】【,】【无】【奈】【只】【剩】【下】【一】【点】【菜】【了】【,】【又】【将】【就】【地】【吃】【了】【点】【。】【晚】【上】【回】【到】【家】【,】【我】【倒】【在】【床】【上】【就】【起】【不】【来】【了】【。】【半】【夜】【,】【又】【被】【蚊】【子】【咬】【醒】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【妈】【妈】【在】【就】【好】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【妈】【妈】【在】【的】【话】【,】【她】【每】【天】【早】【晨】【5】【点】【多】【就】【给】【我】【们】【准】【备】【丰】【盛】【的】【早】【餐】【了】【。】【而】【且】【,】【她】【还】【会】【准】【时】【喊】【我】【起】【床】【,】【以】【免】【我】【睡】【过】【头】【,】【赶】【不】【上】【校】【车】【。】【虽】【然】【她】【的】【声】【音】【惊】【天】【动】【地】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【在】【的】【话】【,】【就】【会】【准】【备】【丰】【盛】【的】【午】【餐】【给】【我】【。】【一】【般】【都】【是】【三】【菜】【一】【汤】【。】【她】【还】【学】【着】【营】【养】【搭】【配】【,】【劝】【我】【多】【吃】【点】【。】【虽】【然】【她】【仍】【不】【忘】【抓】【紧】【时】【间】【唠】【叨】【,】【但】【我】【没】【有】【急】【火】【攻】【心】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【她】【在】【的】【话】【,】【夜】【里】【都】【会】【巡】【房】【。】【她】【会】【帮】【我】【把】【踢】【掉】【的】【被】【子】【盖】【上】【,】【坐】【在】【床】【边】【帮】【我】【驱】【驱】【蚊】【子】【煽】【煽】【风】【,】【就】【像】【我】【的】【守】【夜】【神】【一】【样】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【妈】【妈】【在】【身】【边】【的】【日】【子】【就】【是】【好】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【想】【妈】【妈】【了】【,】【妈】【妈】【快】【回】【来】【吧】【,】【不】【管】【你】【怎】【样】【唠】【叨】【我】【也】【不】【烦】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【早】【在】【一】【个】【月】【前】【,】【爸】【爸】【就】【一】【本】【正】【经】【地】【对】【我】【宣】【布】【:】【“】【威】【威】【,】【我】【最】【近】【要】【对】【你】【进】【行】【一】【次】【特】【别】【的】【考】【试】【。】【”】【我】【不】【知】【道】【爸】【爸】【要】【出】【什】【么】【精】【灵】【古】【怪】【的】【题】【目】【,】【心】【里】【总】【是】【提】【心】【吊】【胆】【的】【,】【在】【学】【习】【上】【也】【不】【敢】【有】【半】【点】【马】【虎】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【是】【一】【连】【过】【了】【好】【些】【天】【,】【也】【不】【见】【爸】【爸】【提】【考】【试】【的】【事】【儿】【,】【我】【以】【为】【爸】【爸】【只】【是】【说】【说】【,】【心】【里】【也】【就】【松】【懈】【下】【来】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【个】【周】【末】【一】【到】【家】【,】【我】【看】【到】【桌】【子】【上】【摆】【着】【一】【张】【字】【条】【,】【上】【面】【写】【着】【:】【“】【威】【,】【回】【来】【到】【奶】【奶】【家】【吃】【午】【饭】【,】【不】【要】【在】【家】【等】【我】【。】【”】【我】【飞】【也】【似】【的】【跑】【到】【奶】【奶】【家】【,】【谁】【知】【奶】【奶】【家】【的】【大】【门】【紧】【闭】【,】【门】【上】【还】【贴】【着】【一】【张】【字】【条】【儿】【:】【“】【今】【天】【我】【们】【都】【出】【门】【了】【,】【有】【事】【明】【天】【来】【。】【”】【我】【只】【好】【又】【怏】【怏】【地】【返】【回】【到】【家】【里】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【坐】【在】【堂】【屋】【的】【椅】【子】【上】【发】【呆】【,】【可】【肚】【子】【却】【闹】【起】【来】【了】【。】【我】【一】【看】【厨】【房】【,】【哎】【!】【不】【好】【,】【门】【紧】【锁】【着】【。】【天】【呀】【!】【我】【咋】【吃】【东】【西】【呀】【?】【面】【包】【、】【饼】【干】【、】【豆】【奶】【这】【些】【现】【成】【的】【食】【品】【又】【全】【在】【爸】【妈】【的】【卧】【室】【里】【锁】【着】【,】【可】【我】【没】【钥】【匙】【呀】【,】【怎】【么】【办】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【抱】【着】【脑】【袋】【苦】【想】【了】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【突】【然】【想】【起】【来】【,】【妈】【妈】【一】【般】【都】【把】【钥】【匙】【放】【在】【窗】【台】【上】【,】【我】【马】【上】【冲】【向】【窗】【台】【,】【真】【让】【我】【大】【失】【所】【望】【,】【没】【有】【钥】【匙】【。】【哎】【!】【我】【叹】【了】【口】【气】【,】【又】【坐】【回】【到】【椅】【子】【上】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【想】【爸】【爸】【或】【妈】【妈】【总】【会】【回】【来】【的】【,】【还】【是】【先】【写】【作】【业】【吧】【,】【没】【准】【这】【种】【方】【式】【能】【忘】【掉】【饥】【饿】【呢】【。】【可】【刚】【写】【到】【一】【半】【,】【肚】【子】【却】【吵】【闹】【得】【更】【凶】【了】【,】【手】【也】【软】【得】【拿】【不】【稳】【笔】【了】【。】【我】【扔】【下】【笔】【,】【推】【开】【本】【子】【,】【开】【始】【认】【真】【地】【考】【虑】【吃】【东】【西】【的】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【在】【堂】【屋】【里】【四】【下】【翻】【寻】【,】【发】【现】【高】【压】【锅】【没】【被】【锁】【进】【厨】【房】【,】【而】【且】【我】【终】【于】【在】【高】【压】【锅】【里】【找】【到】【了】【剩】【米】【饭】【,】【旁】【边】【还】【有】【一】【袋】【豆】【奶】【。】【我】【顿】【时】【有】【了】【主】【意】【:】【用】【开】【水】【泡】【米】【饭】【和】【豆】【奶】【吃】【。】【但】【装】【水】【的】【三】【个】【暖】【瓶】【全】【是】【空】【的】【,】【我】【平】【生】【第】【一】【次】【真】【正】【理】【解】【到】【“】【饥】【肠】【辘】【辘】【”】【的】【含】【义】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【办】【法】【,】【我】【只】【好】【厚】【着】【脸】【皮】【去】【邻】【居】【家】【找】【水】【了】【。】【邻】【居】【大】【娘】【给】【我】【装】【了】【满】【满】【一】【瓶】【水】【。】【我】【回】【到】【家】【里】【,】【用】【茶】【杯】【把】【冷】【饭】【泡】【上】【,】【把】【豆】【奶】【也】【冲】【好】【了】【,】【好】【一】【阵】【狼】【吞】【虎】【咽】【,】【肚】【子】【终】【于】【没】【有】【意】【见】【了】【。】【吃】【过】【饭】【,】【我】【专】【心】【地】【伏】【在】【堂】【屋】【的】【桌】【子】【上】【写】【作】【业】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夜】【幕】【刚】【刚】【降】【临】【,】【爸】【爸】【、】【妈】【妈】【才】【一】【起】【回】【来】【。】【他】【们】【进】【房】【就】【问】【:】【“】【威】【,】【你】【吃】【过】【饭】【了】【吗】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【嘻】【嘻】【一】【笑】【,】【答】【道】【:】【“】【天】【无】【绝】【人】【之】【路】【嘛】【,】【何】【况】【我】【是】【男】【子】【汉】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【一】【听】【就】【笑】【得】【合】【不】【拢】【嘴】【,】【爸】【爸】【更】【是】【喜】【出】【望】【外】【,】【他】【用】【手】【摸】【着】【我】【的】【头】【,】【夸】【赞】【地】【说】【:】【“】【今】【天】【是】【我】【对】【你】【的】【特】【别】【考】【试】【,】【专】【考】【你】【的】【紧】【急】【应】【变】【和】【自】【我】【生】【存】【能】【力】【,】【不】【错】【,】【你】【今】【天】【的】【考】【试】【得】【满】【分】【。】【不】【过】【,】【以】【后】【我】【还】【会】【随】【时】【考】【试】【的】【哟】【!】【”】【噢】【,】【原】【来】【是】【这】【样】【的】【考】【试】【啊】【!】【我】【笑】【了】【,】【很】【自】【信】【地】【说】【:】【“】【爸】【爸】【,】【你】【考】【吧】【,】【我】【不】【怕】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【笑】【声】【在】【房】【间】【里】【飘】【荡】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【选】【材】【好】【,】【新】【颖】【又】【独】【特】【。】【培】【养】【孩】【子】【应】【急】【应】【变】【的】【生】【存】【能】【力】【是】【现】【代】【家】【长】【不】【可】【忽】【视】【的】【课】【题】【,】【可】【是】【毕】【竟】【大】【多】【数】【家】【长】【忘】【记】【了】【,】【本】【文】【有】【提】【醒】【作】【用】【。】【爸】【爸】【的】【考】【试】【题】【好】【,】【儿】【子】【解】【答】【的】【也】【不】【错】【,】【这】【样】【培】【养】【的】【孩】【子】【一】【定】【能】【适】【应】【未】【来】【的】【需】【要】【。】【文】【章】【描】【写】【生】【动】【,】【富】【有】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【也】【洋】【溢】【着】【生】【活】【气】【息】【!】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【黄】【金】【山】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】胡因梦【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【风】【霜】【雪】【雨】【锻】【造】【洁】【白】【无】【瑕】【的】【品】【格】【,】【吞】【下】【苦】【辣】【酸】【水】【,】【奉】【献】【爱】【心】【的】【结】【晶】【…】【…】【”】【大】【家】【好】【!】【伴】【着】【这】【首】【优】【美】【的】【乐】【曲】【,】【我】【—】【—】【食】【盐】【和】【诸】【位】【见】【面】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【生】【活】【在】【一】【个】【大】【家】【庭】【里】【,】【家】【里】【成】【员】【众】【多】【,】【有】【海】【盐】【、】【池】【盐】【、】【井】【盐】【、】【土】【盐】【、】【岩】【盐】【、】【砂】【石】【盐】【、】【水】【晶】【盐】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【随】【着】【社】【会】【的】【发】【展】【,】【我】【们】【的】【家】【族】【又】【增】【添】【了】【很】【多】【新】【的】【成】【员】【,】【如】【低】【钠】【盐】【、】【调】【味】【盐】【、】【麻】【辣】【盐】【、】【汤】【料】【盐】【、】【保】【健】【盐】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【家】【族】【可】【不】【是】【“】【只】【吃】【闲】【饭】【的】【二】【流】【子】【”】【,】【我】【们】【对】【人】【类】【的】【作】【用】【可】【大】【了】【。】【古】【书】【上】【就】【已】【提】【到】【我】【们】【有】【“】【引】【火】【下】【行】【,】【润】【燥】【祛】【风】【”】【之】【能】【,】【“】【擦】【牙】【固】【齿】【、】【清】【热】【渗】【湿】【”】【之】【效】【,】【还】【能】【“】【治】【脚】【气】【”】【;】【现】【在】【有】【人】【发】【现】【我】【们】【还】【有】【杀】【菌】【消】【毒】【、】【美】【容】【、】【清】【洁】【皮】【肤】【等】【功】【能】【,】【如】【被】【蜜】【蜂】【、】【蚊】【子】【、】【跳】【蚤】【等】【叮】【咬】【后】【,】【立】【即】【用】【浓】【盐】【水】【清】【洗】【患】【处】【,】【可】【消】【肿】【去】【毒】【;】【每】【天】【用】【淡】【盐】【水】【漱】【口】【,】【可】【预】【防】【各】【种】【口】【腔】【病】【;】【有】【汗】【渍】【的】【白】【色】【衣】【服】【,】【先】【在】【浓】【度】【为】【5】【%】【的】【盐】【水】【中】【揉】【一】【揉】【,】【再】【用】【肥】【皂】【搓】【洗】【,】【就】【能】【洗】【掉】【黄】【色】【汗】【斑】【;】【食】【盐】【一】【匙】【,】【白】【醋】【半】【匙】【,】【开】【水】【半】【杯】【,】【溶】【好】【后】【用】【棉】【花】【蘸】【之】【洗】【面】【,】【每】【日】【一】【次】【可】【治】【疗】【粉】【刺】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【另】【外】【,】【工】【业】【生】【产】【也】【离】【不】【开】【我】【们】【。】【据】【有】【关】【部】【门】【统】【计】【,】【与】【我】【们】【有】【关】【的】【产】【品】【达】【1】【.】【4】【万】【种】【之】【多】【,】【食】【品】【、】【化】【工】【、】【冶】【炼】【、】【陶】【瓷】【、】【玻】【璃】【、】【医】【药】【等】【工】【业】【中】【均】【有】【我】【们】【的】【身】【影】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【还】【是】【人】【类】【延】【续】【生】【命】【的】【必】【需】【品】【。】【因】【为】【只】【有】【我】【们】【能】【调】【节】【人】【体】【内】【水】【分】【的】【均】【衡】【和】【分】【布】【,】【维】【持】【体】【液】【平】【衡】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【过】【,】【我】【们】【也】【是】【一】【把】【“】【双】【刃】【剑】【”】【哦】【!】【虽】【然】【你】【们】【人】【类】【的】【生】【存】【绝】【对】【离】【不】【开】【我】【们】【,】【但】【如】【果】【食】【用】【不】【当】【就】【会】【有】【诸】【多】【弊】【端】【,】【尤】【其】【是】【女】【性】【。】【法】【国】【有】【句】【俗】【语】【:】【“】【美】【女】【生】【在】【山】【上】【,】【不】【生】【在】【海】【边】【。】【”】【意】【思】【是】【说】【,】【住】【在】【海】【边】【的】【女】【性】【因】【为】【平】【时】【摄】【入】【我】【们】【食】【盐】【较】【多】【,】【所】【以】【皮】【肤】【很】【容】【易】【长】【出】【皱】【纹】【。】【专】【家】【解】【释】【说】【,】【我】【们】【食】【盐】【以】【钠】【离】【子】【和】【氯】【离】【子】【的】【形】【式】【存】【在】【于】【你】【们】【人】【体】【血】【液】【和】【体】【液】【当】【中】【,】【在】【保】【持】【人】【体】【渗】【透】【压】【、】【酸】【碱】【平】【衡】【和】【水】【分】【平】【衡】【方】【面】【起】【着】【非】【常】【重】【要】【的】【作】【用】【。】【如】【果】【食】【用】【过】【多】【,】【体】【内】【钠】【离】【子】【增】【加】【,】【就】【会】【导】【致】【面】【部】【细】【胞】【失】【水】【,】【从】【而】【造】【成】【皮】【肤】【老】【化】【,】【时】【间】【长】【了】【就】【会】【使】【皱】【纹】【增】【多】【。】【另】【外】【,】【食】【用】【我】【们】【食】【盐】【过】【量】【还】【会】【对】【你】【们】【人】【类】【的】【心】【脏】【产】【生】【很】【大】【压】【力】【,】【使】【你】【们】【的】【血】【压】【升】【高】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【所】【以】【,】【你】【们】【人】【类】【一】【定】【要】【合】【理】【地】【利】【用】【我】【们】【哦】【,】【每】【人】【每】【天】【摄】【入】【的】【食】【盐】【量】【一】【定】【要】【控】【制】【在】【6】【克】【以】【内】【,】【否】【则】【将】【会】【危】【害】【到】【你】【们】【的】【健】【康】【哦】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【就】【是】【我】【们】【食】【盐】【—】【—】【身】【心】【融】【入】【餐】【桌】【,】【默】【默】【潜】【藏】【自】【己】【,】【却】【勇】【敢】【承】【担】【着】【五】【味】【领】【军】【的】【重】【任】【;】【催】【化】【裂】【变】【躯】【体】【,】【走】【进】【生】【产】【建】【筑】【医】【疗】【领】【域】【和】【航】【天】【航】【空】【航】【海】【事】【业】【,】【用】【我】【们】【的】【身】【体】【创】【建】【玲】【珑】【剔】【透】【之】【丰】【碑】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【篇】【文】【艺】【性】【说】【明】【文】【采】【用】【第】【一】【人】【称】【现】【身】【说】【法】【,】【使】【文】【章】【在】【准】【确】【性】【的】【基】【础】【上】【更】【添】【生】【活】【情】【趣】【;】【比】【喻】【、】【拟】【人】【等】【修】【辞】【方】【法】【的】【运】【用】【,】【增】【强】【了】【被】【说】【明】【事】【物】【的】【形】【象】【性】【;】【说】【明】【、】【叙】【述】【和】【描】【写】【三】【种】【写】【作】【手】【法】【的】【交】【叉】【使】【用】【,】【使】【得】【文】【章】【更】【加】【生】【动】【活】【泼】【。】【因】【此】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【在】【给】【人】【知】【识】【的】【同】【时】【,】【又】【增】【添】【了】【文】【学】【情】【趣】【,】【读】【来】【引】【人】【入】【胜】【,】【是】【篇】【不】【可】【多】【得】【的】【美】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【邱】【云】【)】

胡因梦:阿q正传读后感 [阿q正传读后感]

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【,】【一】【只】【小】【松】【鼠】【,】【能】【在】【弱】【肉】【强】【食】【的】【大】【自】【然】【中】【生】【存】【下】【来】【,】【很】【幸】【运】【。】【虽】【然】【生】【活】【中】【处】【处】【都】【有】【困】【难】【,】【但】【我】【很】【知】【足】【,】【我】【要】【感】【谢】【我】【的】【妈】【妈】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【妈】【妈】【”】【这】【个】【词】【对】【我】【来】【说】【既】【陌】【生】【又】【熟】【悉】【。】【在】【我】【刚】【出】【生】【不】【久】【,】【妈】【妈】【就】【把】【我】【送】【到】【了】【外】【婆】【家】【,】【在】【外】【婆】【家】【我】【度】【过】【了】【一】【个】【不】【完】【整】【的】【童】【年】【。】【别】【的】【小】【松】【鼠】【每】【天】【都】【围】【在】【妈】【妈】【的】【身】【边】【,】【饿】【了】【有】【妈】【妈】【亲】【手】【做】【的】【饭】【,】【而】【我】【没】【有】【;】【冷】【了】【有】【妈】【妈】【做】【的】【衣】【裳】【,】【而】【我】【没】【有】【;】【晚】【上】【睡】【觉】【有】【妈】【妈】【唱】【摇】【篮】【曲】【,】【而】【我】【没】【有】【。】【后】【来】【我】【到】【了】【上】【学】【的】【年】【龄】【,】【爸】【爸】【妈】【妈】【把】【我】【接】【到】【了】【身】【边】【,】【这】【时】【我】【才】【感】【觉】【到】【母】【爱】【的】【温】【暖】【、】【甜】【蜜】【。】【每】【天】【上】【学】【前】【带】【走】【妈】【妈】【的】【叮】【咛】【,】【放】【学】【后】【迎】【来】【妈】【妈】【的】【微】【笑】【,】【晚】【上】【睡】【觉】【依】【在】【妈】【妈】【温】【暖】【的】【怀】【抱】【中】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【这】【种】【甜】【蜜】【中】【,】【我】【任】【由】【时】【间】【飞】【逝】【,】【尽】【情】【地】【享】【受】【着】【幸】【福】【的】【生】【活】【。】【可】【这】【种】【甜】【美】【的】【日】【子】【并】【没】【有】【伴】【随】【我】【太】【久】【,】【我】【的】【妈】【妈】【被】【一】【个】【可】【恶】【的】【猎】【人】【捕】【杀】【了】【,】【此】【后】【的】【日】【子】【里】【我】【是】【在】【泪】【水】【中】【度】【过】【的】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【开】【始】【害】【怕】【“】【妈】【妈】【”】【这】【个】【词】【,】【每】【当】【听】【见】【有】【喊】【“】【妈】【妈】【”】【的】【声】【音】【,】【我】【的】【心】【就】【像】【被】【针】【扎】【了】【一】【般】【,】【很】【疼】【,】【很】【疼】【。】【可】【在】【学】【校】【里】【,】【同】【学】【们】【的】【话】【题】【又】【总】【是】【和】【“】【妈】【妈】【”】【挂】【在】【一】【起】【,】【这】【时】【我】【就】【会】【默】【默】【地】【走】【开】【,】【我】【害】【怕】【,】【害】【怕】【他】【们】【问】【:】【“】【小】【松】【鼠】【,】【你】【妈】【妈】【呢】【?】【你】【妈】【妈】【会】【做】【好】【吃】【的】【饭】【菜】【吗】【?】【你】【妈】【妈】【漂】【亮】【吗】【?】【你】【妈】【妈】【…】【…】【”】【可】【越】【是】【想】【逃】【避】【,】【就】【越】【是】【逃】【不】【掉】【,】【时】【间】【长】【了】【,】【大】【家】【都】【知】【道】【我】【没】【有】【妈】【妈】【,】【于】【是】【都】【用】【一】【种】【异】【样】【的】【眼】【光】【看】【我】【:】【有】【同】【情】【,】【有】【怜】【悯】【,】【有】【瞧】【不】【起】【。】【我】【的】【自】【卑】【感】【越】【来】【越】【重】【。】【后】【来】【我】【想】【起】【了】【妈】【妈】【说】【的】【话】【:】【“】【生】【活】【中】【会】【有】【许】【多】【磨】【难】【,】【只】【有】【坚】【强】【的】【孩】【子】【才】【能】【打】【败】【它】【们】【。】【”】【我】【不】【再】【低】【着】【头】【了】【,】【我】【要】【做】【坚】【强】【的】【孩】【子】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【人】【们】【常】【说】【我】【很】【懂】【事】【,】【很】【会】【做】【家】【务】【。】【这】【些】【都】【得】【感】【谢】【我】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【是】【她】【的】【教】【导】【让】【我】【这】【样】【优】【秀】【。】【我】【要】【感】【谢】【我】【的】【妈】【妈】【养】【育】【了】【我】【,】【给】【了】【我】【了】【解】【世】【界】【的】【机】【会】【;】【我】【要】【感】【谢】【我】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【是】【她】【教】【我】【学】【会】【了】【坚】【强】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【世】【上】【只】【有】【妈】【妈】【好】【…】【…】【”】【我】【最】【喜】【欢】【唱】【这】【首】【人】【类】【的】【歌】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【立】【意】【新】【颖】【,】【结】【构】【完】【整】【且】【有】【层】【次】【感】【。】【小】【作】【者】【化】【身】【为】【小】【松】【鼠】【,】【讲】【述】【了】【自】【己】【的】【母】【爱】【失】【而】【复】【得】【又】【不】【幸】【失】【去】【的】【故】【事】【,】【贯】【穿】【其】【中】【的】【是】【对】【母】【亲】【的】【感】【恩】【。】【这】【种】【爱】【既】【有】【嘘】【寒】【问】【暖】【的】【细】【腻】【,】【又】【有】【谆】【谆】【教】【导】【的】【殷】【切】【。】【是】【母】【亲】【让】【他】【在】【困】【境】【中】【磨】【炼】【,】【在】【磨】【炼】【中】【坚】【强】【,】【在】【坚】【强】【中】【成】【长】【。】【即】【使】【母】【亲】【不】【在】【了】【,】【但】【是】【她】【的】【爱】【一】【直】【在】【温】【暖】【地】【延】【续】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【李】【文】【艺】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】胡因梦【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【年】【夏】【天】【,】【我】【下】【地】【割】【草】【,】【遇】【到】【了】【一】【件】【意】【想】【不】【到】【的】【事】【情】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【钻】【进】【一】【块】【玉】【米】【地】【,】【发】【现】【它】【旁】【边】【杂】【草】【茂】【盛】【,】【暗】【自】【高】【兴】【,】【心】【想】【用】【不】【了】【多】【长】【时】【间】【就】【能】【割】【一】【筐】【草】【了】【。】【我】【正】【埋】【头】【割】【草】【,】【忽】【然】【眼】【前】【一】【个】【灰】【不】【溜】【秋】【的】【家】【伙】【吓】【了】【我】【一】【跳】【。】【我】【放】【下】【镰】【刀】【,】【定】【睛】【一】【看】【,】【原】【来】【是】【一】【只】【大】【鸟】【,】【灰】【色】【的】【羽】【毛】【上】【有】【几】【处】【白】【斑】【点】【,】【头】【顶】【上】【还】【有】【一】【撮】【毛】【,】【是】【个】【凤】【头】【。】【此】【刻】【大】【鸟】【正】【安】【静】【地】【卧】【在】【那】【里】【,】【一】【动】【不】【动】【。】【我】【好】【纳】【闷】【:】【凭】【我】【的】【经】【验】【,】【在】【田】【野】【里】【如】【果】【人】【与】【鸟】【不】【期】【而】【遇】【,】【鸟】【顷】【刻】【间】【就】【会】【飞】【得】【无】【影】【无】【踪】【了】【,】【可】【它】【为】【什】【么】【旁】【若】【无】【人】【地】【一】【动】【不】【动】【呢】【?】【我】【静】【静】【地】【欣】【赏】【着】【眼】【前】【的】【一】【幕】【,】【绿】【油】【油】【的】【草】【丛】【里】【安】【详】【地】【卧】【着】【一】【只】【灰】【色】【的】【大】【鸟】【,】【这】【是】【一】【幅】【多】【么】【优】【美】【的】【图】【画】【。】【我】【沉】【浸】【在】【画】【意】【之】【中】【,】【久】【久】【不】【愿】【破】【坏】【这】【安】【宁】【和】【谐】【的】【一】【幕】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【和】【鸟】【就】【这】【样】【互】【相】【对】【视】【着】【,】【彼】【此】【似】【乎】【都】【在】【思】【考】【着】【对】【方】【下】【一】【步】【的】【行】【为】【。】【我】【想】【:】【这】【只】【鸟】【可】【能】【是】【受】【伤】【了】【,】【或】【者】【是】【有】【病】【了】【。】【不】【然】【,】【它】【早】【就】【应】【该】【飞】【走】【了】【。】【好】【奇】【心】【驱】【使】【我】【非】【要】【弄】【个】【究】【竟】【,】【我】【弯】【下】【腰】【,】【蹲】【在】【那】【只】【鸟】【跟】【前】【,】【它】【依】【然】【平】【静】【地】【看】【着】【我】【,】【丝】【毫】【没】【有】【飞】【走】【的】【意】【思】【。】【我】【伸】【出】【手】【,】【抓】【起】【了】【那】【只】【大】【鸟】【,】【奇】【怪】【,】【它】【没】【有】【任】【何】【挣】【扎】【,】【只】【静】【静】【地】【呆】【在】【我】【手】【里】【,】【我】【看】【它】【的】【身】【体】【,】【并】【没】【有】【受】【伤】【的】【痕】【迹】【,】【也】【不】【像】【有】【病】【的】【样】【子】【。】【可】【就】【在】【我】【低】【头】【的】【一】【刹】【那】【,】【秘】【密】【解】【开】【了】【!】【原】【来】【,】【它】【卧】【着】【的】【地】【方】【有】【一】【堆】【鸟】【蛋】【,】【我】【放】【下】【大】【鸟】【,】【随】【手】【拿】【起】【一】【枚】【鸟】【蛋】【,】【放】【在】【耳】【朵】【旁】【一】【晃】【,】【便】【知】【道】【小】【鸟】【已】【经】【在】【里】【面】【孕】【育】【了】【。】【我】【拿】【着】【鸟】【蛋】【,】【看】【着】【那】【只】【大】【鸟】【,】【它】【站】【在】【那】【里】【惊】【恐】【地】【盯】【着】【我】【,】【似】【乎】【在】【乞】【求】【我】【放】【下】【它】【的】【宝】【宝】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【被】【眼】【前】【的】【一】【幕】【震】【撼】【了】【,】【它】【为】【了】【保】【护】【住】【自】【己】【的】【小】【宝】【宝】【,】【竟】【然】【冒】【着】【生】【命】【危】【险】【,】【不】【惜】【任】【何】【代】【价】【,】【寸】【步】【不】【离】【地】【守】【护】【着】【它】【的】【孩】【子】【们】【。】【它】【冒】【着】【自】【己】【随】【时】【都】【可】【能】【被】【人】【抓】【走】【,】【或】【被】【别】【的】【天】【敌】【吃】【掉】【的】【危】【险】【,】【在】【尽】【着】【一】【个】【母】【亲】【的】【职】【责】【。】【此】【刻】【,】【我】【被】【这】【种】【崇】【高】【的】【母】【爱】【深】【深】【地】【打】【动】【了】【,】【我】【轻】【轻】【将】【鸟】【蛋】【放】【回】【原】【处】【,】【悄】【悄】【地】【后】【退】【了】【几】【步】【,】【随】【后】【转】【身】【离】【去】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【抓】【住】【自】【己】【亲】【身】【经】【历】【的】【一】【件】【事】【,】【善】【于】【从】【中】【发】【现】【和】【挖】【掘】【主】【题】【,】【将】【本】【来】【平】【平】【常】【常】【的】【事】【物】【写】【得】【有】【情】【有】【趣】【,】【通】【过】【对】【大】【鸟】【在】【极】【其】【危】【险】【的】【环】【境】【中】【,】【临】【危】【不】【惧】【,】【处】【之】【泰】【然】【的】【行】【为】【,】【深】【刻】【地】【揭】【示】【了】【伟】【大】【无】【私】【的】【母】【爱】【不】【仅】【仅】【存】【在】【于】【人】【类】【身】【上】【,】【而】【且】【也】【存】【在】【于】【动】【物】【身】【上】【。】【文】【中】【巧】【妙】【地】【运】【用】【了】【情】【态】【细】【节】【描】【写】【,】【如】【写】【大】【鸟】【的】【眼】【神】【:】【“】【它】【依】【然】【平】【静】【地】【看】【着】【我】【,】【丝】【毫】【没】【有】【要】【飞】【走】【的】【意】【思】【”】【,】【“】【它】【站】【在】【那】【里】【惊】【恐】【地】【盯】【着】【我】【,】【似】【乎】【在】【乞】【求】【我】【放】【下】【它】【的】【宝】【宝】【。】【”】【这】【些】【描】【写】【,】【着】【墨】【不】【多】【,】【却】【深】【刻】【地】【表】【现】【了】【鸟】【通】【人】【性】【,】【母】【爱】【深】【邃】【。】【也】【显】【示】【了】【作】【者】【观】【察】【细】【腻】【,】【体】【物】【入】【微】【。】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【李】【俊】【平】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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